Sakhi and Vishwa
(These
two characters came to me recently..... I did not create them. In trying to
imagine what they would do and where they would go, this little piece of story
emerged.
This is the kind of story that I LOVE to read! And truly enjoyed writing this sentimental piece...
There is some reality here, and a lot of imagination. But somebody said once, that there's no difference between the two!! What you imagine is happening somewhere, so it's real. And what you perceive as real...from a height, it is no more than imagination. So here it goes....)

The
river Bhagirathi flowed silently, as if unwilling to disturb the sacred,
sombre atmosphere of the ashram. Morning was dawning, the mists lifting over
the landscape, revealing a cluster of huts in the middle of a jungle clearing.
There was an unusually hectic activity that day-- some running around engaged
in various errands while some sitting in silence, trying to stifle a sorrow, a
volley of tears, with a heavy heart.
Sage
Kanva was gravely ill, after months and months of sickness and suffering!
This is the kind of story that I LOVE to read! And truly enjoyed writing this sentimental piece...
There is some reality here, and a lot of imagination. But somebody said once, that there's no difference between the two!! What you imagine is happening somewhere, so it's real. And what you perceive as real...from a height, it is no more than imagination. So here it goes....)

Sakhi
walked up the small hillock behind the ashram which overlooked the valley. Away
from the crowds of the ashram, away from the heavy melancholic atmosphere. She
wanted to get away from everything, sit somewhere quietly and weep. Burst her
heart open in Nature’s lap and wail her sorrows away. Unable to do it in the
ashram, where she was supposed to be the strong one! Yet incapable of bearing
the heaviness that was building up within. She quickly strode to the top of the
hillock and walked towards the lonely tree at the edge of the cliff. There she
saw him! He was sitting motionless on a
stone slab under the tree, eyes open and transfixed at the rising Sun far away
in the horizons!
‘Vishwa’,
she called out gently. He turned, and quickly wiped away his tears. Their eyes
met for a moment before he looked away.
Why
are you weeping, you thug, you must be relieved now? She didn’t ask. But her
expression betrayed her thoughts. Vishwa smiled and stood up, looking away at
the distant clouds. Then he turned. “Sakhi…the monks from Tibet will be
arriving any moment. And as per their custom, they’ll not spend two nights in
the same place, so they’re departing tomorrow, at this hour….” He paused, drew
in a long breath and said, “I’m going away with them.”
It
seemed ages when she again opened her eyes, and saw Vishwa bending over her,
gently caressing her locks. She was lying on the ground, her head on his lap.
‘What happened?’ she mumbled. “You collapsed,” he said, “when I mentioned about
the Tibetan monks. Are you not well?”
The
total force of the situation blew through her and she wept inconsolably.
Tibetan monks! They arrive when the head of the ashram leaves the body! What
does it mean? Maharshi Kanva….? And this fool wants to go away with them,
leaving me alone? She buried her face in her palms and sobbed…grief tearing
away her feeble heart. The grief of the impending departure of a father figure.
And the very thought of separation from...
A
distant gong struck, breaking the veil of sorrow that had descended on top of
that small hillock. It was a signal that the monks had arrived. Although all
arrangements had been done to receive and accommodate them, Vishwa had to be at
the ashram, to oversee the activities for the rest of the day. They stood up
and he wiped her moist eyes with a piece of cloth.
“Why
do you want to go with them?” she implored, almost begging him not to, her
voice choking. His face was grave, expressionless! He turned and began walking
down in silence, Sakhi following him. A cool breeze blew from the valley below,
as if trying to caress, comfort and soothe her. They reached the flower
garden and were about to turn towards Kanva's ashram when she abruptly held his
hand and stood facing him.
“Answer
me,” her voice shook but she was determined.
He
looked deep into her soft blue eyes, which were filling up rapidly. Holding
back his tears he said, “Because…… that’s my destiny.” And gently shook her
hands off and walked towards the waiting ashram.


Wow! Simply Wow! Each scenario gave me goose bumps while reading! :-)
ReplyDeleteThe monks will not be allowed to come into Kanva Maharshi's ashram, because he will be very specially guarded. They will be chased out of the ashram, and they'll run back to Tibet chanting 'Om Mani Padme Hum'!!! :-)
ReplyDeletehey archana !!! it is a fresh breather to see this spontaneous humour !! Loved it. Can imagine the monks running away chanting !! ha ha ha ha :-)
DeleteBreathtaking !! no other words to describe this beautiful piece of writing !!
ReplyDelete:) <3 Sakhi Monks & The Destiny ~
ReplyDeleteCool sir. Seriously amazingly cool.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of Amish's writing(The author of Shiva Triology)
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